How's My Driving?

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Do you have feedback on:

• The way I'm writing Raju's personality?


• OOC stuff, like whether I'm communicating well enough?


• HTML stuff, like whether the text in my info posts is readable?


• Anything about Raju's background I could be writing better?

(I'd particularly appreciate that last one, since absolutely everything about his background and beliefs are things I've had to google.)

Or anything else? Feel free to let me know! I feel better when I know whether there's something I should be trying to improve on.